Kyoske’s comments on editing¬†are spot on. I am struggling with writing this new scene and I can’t seem to get it to flow. I don’t know if fear is hindering me or if it’s that my children and husband were home all week. Maybe a combination of the two.¬† Also time’s a ticking and I’m procrastinating the synopsis for the contest, partially because some of my subplot is in flux with the new scenes.

Critique group update: On the back burner until I’m done with the synopsis.